When the last man on earth was sleeping, at mid night... heard the knock on his door...
Tok...Tok...Tok...!
A young pretty guy, who had been sleeping till then, wakes up from his half sleep... marches forward to the door...
When he opened the door fearing like hell... to his surprise he saw an old open note lying on his door step,!! without signal of anyone around the front yard.....
The note says. "today, you are blessed by me! U will get all that you wish, if u call me". The guys eye waved every nook and corner but found none around. He walked back with thousands of thoughts flashing in his mind... He asks himself, " who that 'me' would be? whom should i call?".
When he was questioning himself, he got a call from an unknown number to his 500 years old mobile which has been kept in showcase for years without charge.....
Tring tring tring.... Tring tring tring....He was not sure if he can attend the call or not. He was in much confused state of mind. His hands started shivering.His face turned blue. He started sweating, his heart beats shot up... they were much heavier and fast than normal. To his surprise, the mobile came flying in air and rested on to his palm.
His hand shivered and he could not read the caller name or number. After half a minute of gazing, he confirmed the caller name. It displayed "past". He was confused than ever. He got no courage to attend the call... The call ended and immediately a message dropped in to his inbox with beep sound, from the same number...He felt like his heartbeats stopped....
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this was a short conversation/story between me and Kamakshi, my sisterly friend through sms... I messaged the very first line above to her on a mid night and she continued it as a story.
The white fonts are sent by me and the other colored fonts by her...
and v dozed off before ending the story.....
y don't u guys try to give an end to this story(!!!) above...
my idea of perfect end to the story above...
He decided to open the message. He searched for his spectacle near the bed and he got it in his left hand... wearing it he opened the message in the inbox...
it reads " Wherever you go, even to the end of the world... whenever it may be, even after millions of full moon... whatever handset u have, with charge or without.......... We will REACH U! Our net work is the best! - PAST is the best".
its ur turn now!
6 comments:
gr8 blog dani
i really enjoy reading ur posts.they r simple n creative, leaving a smile on my face evtym i go thro :)
@ nisha...
Thanks a lot...happy that u like my blog. U r also one who encourage me in writing. Still i remember ur comment that i need to concentrate on grammar. Well, i will do that too...
Hi M.R.
Never expected this as a blog from You..shocking surprise.. But i got a doubt .. hw u(SHORT TERM MEMORY LOSS DUDE) remember all my wrds??lol.. inbox la save panni vechurukka thaana??..N ways, Happy blogging.. i wud try to continue this story when both of us r free ...
He felt like his heartbeats stopped....(contd) and with an jerk he woke up from his bed,,,,he then understood its a bizzare nightmare which he had.He searched for his mobile in his jeans & he found that there was a new message in his inbox...."hey sweet heart, i was neither happy nor frustrated when we were together.. but i am now sure that ,i started missing you and i am now feeling empty without you,, after our break up..i want you to fill the void in my life,love you babe".
He now thought of the nightmare, being lonely as a last man on the earth and that too for 500 years blah blah ba...... there were flow of hormones in his body all over.. he just replied"me too love you honey"
In 2 secs he got a call from her and they both just started chit chatting happily .......
(MORAL-Its just not the happiness which you get on meeting a person,,its just the emptiness which you feel when the person is not around with you)
dude....
wow man... this was unexpected ..
i lik ur ideas n way u have implemented ur blog.. specially includin the mails of your friends.. very good man.. keep it up...
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